【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( d. M3 H6 D. ]0 `From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) w; C  f3 I- E  mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% C; {4 v* a# L, f9 gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: f9 t' L# p. b9 sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 C) [) N8 H8 L  T6 C7 ^( LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. _$ }0 Y- g; d+ VIf today isn’t too late,
8 f8 v1 v* o3 m3 a$ I  s, L; g- eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, P! l( P$ @. A# i3 l! w; d8 S/ qI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- Y, t- b2 N* C! A% @Entrust my love within your heart
, d8 \: q7 @3 I  OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 c$ e# Q: f& v) @. M/ c: cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; B# G+ E4 z5 M# ^8 YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ G- W. |: O. f- i% F2 P) GIf today isn’t too late,
5 X( \) Q/ {. s$ ^' TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! n& E4 t+ @) ~9 G# a* pCan I entrust it to you?
. {/ \: H/ R1 ?. ^7 l1 @( D" FEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

) X7 K: p) k2 g, n$ T' ?( U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

% N, \; h! L. b- m! i; _) z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 C9 }9 O: ~! \<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! [7 |/ b1 W& M8 L+ D6 K/ T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( |7 t" p2 r6 i) T1 ]3 f  u# K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; [6 f8 w+ h' M! }, I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 t0 ?8 o$ s! R/ {<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 R. ]$ q" s. n1 z# S  i; g/ t/ z9 B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ P5 `, |+ T; _  V$ A% C7 \<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 h) [0 w$ C& o4 n3 T3 N" h7 {<P>但我不会</P>
/ C8 ^- x" j* s9 I9 I" X8 i( }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 r+ r1 p! i( ^2 V1 K- {7 \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" |1 Z7 {$ j2 I  p9 t' c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 ]7 X  b+ k3 N3 r* S9 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ L. b) @5 Y+ j9 V7 g2 R! @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! J6 e! b$ |  G3 I  a8 S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: }; M% y8 P8 X& w: r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ Y! h" r! }" l: [<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ i# M! D3 w: O' o# ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 I7 l( a2 Y% P<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, ]8 `; \; B4 v3 y. K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; Q$ y- e5 K3 o2 y1 N% U<P>But I never did </P>
) h* t2 k: ]' H; s0 j7 S<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, C) H  G5 F! v- v1 o) A, H<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 P7 e9 k  r8 Y, g2 w<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; d/ s9 d$ G1 o) F' ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* F4 b! e6 G' o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 `. m% _9 n* s+ K- G! \  N& f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# k( c7 J. q  z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 ~3 ^8 y9 `/ Y  r; O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# k2 F0 C! x; u$ f: r: |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 v% m! D7 P% I. b4 |% B$ T这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 |8 K' _) v# X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ V; j6 B* {* [7 w% }5 G, s7 H( ^) i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>