【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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/ _5 w. d8 x# K我另将歌词附在此。
6 Z, O# L+ J/ M( BThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ G3 h9 A2 k1 P7 }) s& BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ h0 F9 N# X: ^- NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 D# A% P* l$ K2 r6 g& f% H2 aI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 \. k  d' {( Z0 L& }5 ~( tI want to confess that I love you,
0 Z$ x7 B* ?1 k" ]7 m" tBut I never did
3 g' }, o5 p* `) W, qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 R8 S" t* n  K! x. y- ^  KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) `! F8 z4 |7 O% `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' P( Y3 P7 y; Z* o" I7 KCan I entrust it to you?
, C; S1 h6 E# @5 l1 mEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- e+ k# d( C% {  ?( E2 DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 x: K: E) R+ Y! Z# z$ iCan I entrust it to you?
  ^; t! R& \5 n2 M4 A9 JEntrust my love within your heart
) l% R3 I0 E( c0 J# m5 M& mCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* S- b; K, Q7 ^# `- L" @. o, r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, a0 ]1 I  R2 Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ b/ M4 M: w7 @& Z1 i- `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% `+ \2 m8 K9 [. C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. U/ Q( ^8 G+ E6 ]9 r. H7 R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 m7 V- Z( ]5 J4 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
7 c' `. B$ @' a+ y! Z( [$ A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ [& {0 l: f2 k% L6 f' j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% M& T1 p% z' ]$ B/ H$ V; w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 z! ~; }' C! m0 v5 J<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 \4 A+ g" d7 b& a' _1 K' G4 d3 O<P>但我不会</P>
7 J* ^6 w- t7 y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! Z% O2 ]) i" n) y/ K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ Y& B# T3 j7 y7 @, h8 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ Y# {$ a4 a  b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) x* @2 g7 H! |. o; P5 ]0 p1 r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 E8 q- K0 R( e) E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# r+ ?; m; `) B: R( Y1 s+ g8 W. J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
" ^* ]1 `* x) W" s* k% _" i<P>但我不会 </P>
, |9 y5 Q0 b. X% _* r1 I& r<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 R$ x2 t6 c* I1 H" s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. z7 K; i& x" j: f<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ b& X- R, C: e: Z9 y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" Q+ A$ u1 b% k) w5 N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 ]) d- t& U- ~- t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 d4 `# ?( K  f+ C/ {; X: p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 ~: @9 T4 p, s4 M$ @, C: F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' j$ @6 U/ j  e: W' z2 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 G+ N. t9 E  h  ~6 a; b2 G% n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( V+ Z* E6 k. A+ E2 l6 P; f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- K6 h: Z+ a# ^5 [8 @$ y9 Q5 }" k 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 _, \# ~8 c: w, w, l这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 ~3 W* u! H- o$ F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>