【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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' ^5 L* G2 y! L7 J+ X0 r3 J! x9 h<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODYzNzI=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
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& f, z# D) h! c; R我另将歌词附在此。
* v$ m/ G( G9 f9 `The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, m: a0 m/ Q+ B/ i) p# bI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 S7 H! k4 D2 b+ ?$ HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" k% ^% e3 k  ~1 ELove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
! [% o- \& i, x* K- H& Z) L+ JI want to confess that I love you,
8 E. N% m  i0 w' v. x& ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ y# Y* P* I8 Z, q8 MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 \" Z! m4 K0 {7 R' @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. W; B! R- L$ ^/ h$ pCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  s0 N  J- P% v* z+ D8 h$ U' hLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
9 `" c' B7 `! h' c; \8 MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ D: _3 T, _( m4 }6 b<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* u0 b0 o% A3 A' F% O$ x: l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
) R7 `  T1 X3 W- F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 T( {1 S: m3 Z: Q5 K% e$ a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) a% [! }5 ?- H! z9 s& `<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 Z+ @( g, T0 j' [7 O& b<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 n  ^2 [" V1 B" u8 {& Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 Z! _" |+ w, ]' S2 Y) E; x<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: A) G2 O+ ^* W- P<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! o& J" B. Z* E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 o  q; V2 I" ]& N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ t8 C( y: w5 [- @: a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% V8 i8 A3 w0 N- B9 f! b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- h) H& ~  @5 x8 h6 N+ ]. V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ x7 e$ n! N1 [' I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 a, D4 H: u$ k1 V  o<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  _) G- T; @3 E0 H; K: i<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 {4 V. m" i6 f<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
+ W- I9 g( B- N+ a<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# N; t! t- p; \: Z0 k/ {, s% e<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* `9 S! r+ c7 A' ~$ ?<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' z) v6 K$ l$ a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! p. s0 V5 {0 b# m1 J( F9 T) K* N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! q9 D, D. p  x" m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! D9 m1 o% r% F. w7 k- W- d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 z# }0 i! g5 b, R! u9 f( f7 ?- \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ U- Q$ T* m5 e1 l, i, b4 b<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
; g* j- F7 Z* M6 A4 O: x) Z- {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 S% c. @2 P$ @9 c$ A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>