【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 X+ S( J: f4 k+ oIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( f6 m$ ?6 c3 J4 U7 I  O* ~But I never did
+ t( [( o% [4 ?$ JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 Y& ?5 ~3 U" ]( g3 H% }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 x! z; N  _/ i) UI want to confess that I love you,
+ Q/ l$ i# S9 Z& _3 P. cBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 H( z5 {3 R5 E2 \' w. eIf today isn’t too late,
1 G& p$ K7 s& W' u9 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ o  p* s. a9 \  p# vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ U. p) s0 T7 K' oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

# P: Q3 t: U5 l. j2 O2 \  c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 i' `" H2 M) d, A4 D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" D7 p0 e5 J% ~3 @: c  p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 s- U- s! d7 b1 j0 _1 Z4 [<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' Z6 a4 l; {( M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
) L9 t# q3 M7 T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
4 X& v2 r% c' j2 Z3 i' L. U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 [" ?/ q& U! y' [; C$ M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. y* F* a- o/ U  b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 H, F. G* }* w; m4 n<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 j0 X1 o/ `$ F0 ]/ _! s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 [  ~8 U8 b$ G9 A+ O<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 D4 _: P) ^# G- `- [. U<P>但我不会</P>
* v0 s& L1 V% C: l1 A+ u' O<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
9 E0 l( A( o! |) e<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& f" k' w% B+ N8 M! `) e! [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 h2 v6 k% K1 M/ v7 y$ l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. Z% z. o6 h" S+ `6 E( m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ u0 M- {5 D7 u0 W$ [& \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 I# Q4 i' w) s8 C3 J: W8 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ \- W+ R+ {3 l8 Z- @& A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! }$ W: y' K7 k( L* u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 @* l. {9 h; g: s3 w3 M" D5 ]6 E<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, S4 ?+ r2 p1 z; y4 d  Z<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 b: W, ]& S% [  {<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# `0 Q; Z$ b+ W1 q' \9 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 ~) T, s& J1 h& i<P>But I never did </P>
: a+ H" i% {# U% x- e<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ P% F* C2 ~  s' Z" S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 e6 d! G0 G: U7 a  A3 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- U  }* e4 g5 x, d' W* g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 ^: O4 O  E: u3 J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 }) k2 N  z2 J: A+ ~  E) [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 O8 A$ H2 ~: b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ A: m) u' L" j' D8 v' [- m$ Y7 t# x; w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# h4 B  l* P- V) M. n) z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 `; H+ D* F; D. d- O. k! b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' M  ]. S+ A3 R5 w7 w4 m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- \! m6 D" M, B  {5 M4 S: `: W$ ^( o2 D+ J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ S0 ]" l% j4 x& H, k' v<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>