【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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3 _. L* V  ~1 `我另将歌词附在此。
7 I: D) J+ s' h# ]1 Z) LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- T! @" e' D0 a$ oFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 q  w! m1 X  h, [, Y8 hI would probably know how you feel
) x! B" G2 y4 w( oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; o% `) N) \* d8 l5 J) RI want to confess that I love you,
# B  s. A5 ?! t6 p& ZBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- u6 w/ h' w; AI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" ^) _3 g: X+ _4 H) s) eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* Z6 o" F* |4 F2 w3 \One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- T6 F; S4 V- I! e7 Z" ~9 lIf today isn’t too late,
& m2 r6 t& ]( j1 pI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, H$ |0 f% _$ g7 ~- `3 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& M+ @# d0 L8 j& Y1 n  rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 l  g) v! k, T4 p& H0 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! i' u4 b" {$ U6 l3 R<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
& Q5 `' m6 E9 Z/ K: ^+ G1 U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) O+ n7 d/ ^5 v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  ?- [# a3 Y0 i% [9 O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 G) s$ i8 L2 e6 u) s2 z* |1 ]: c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. A7 w; k% C+ _<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( z9 P, v' M+ u- f: p8 |- k3 u<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 ]- S/ D' S* [& Z/ @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- Y# m) }# S$ c/ z% o- Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, F" h6 i, P0 g7 u6 l$ t<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: ^& O4 ?9 r6 Y, p& y% i* y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 x8 c/ Y" `/ H- `9 Y8 R! r2 K3 O7 t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
# e( m0 y4 ^  h0 P9 {2 x<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 E4 b1 O3 n) a( p<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  v1 U& B3 T, x+ a" D# g/ J% M" g<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 }" ^) ]; E  K/ t4 Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" P1 @' g! p/ L& ]9 [0 I$ H. Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ M. ^# V* v' x/ f: n  ^+ A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% t, U" X/ J+ C9 \. N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" T0 d1 a1 I/ t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- [) [: O( G! A) {/ m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ Y: y  c8 o0 h( [+ }. V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 W9 M1 m0 V9 D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 z8 W) }  c' ?. X6 U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 S4 a% m/ g% }6 m) j<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
% V+ d& ^8 U: K; N, M; `9 H  h<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  Q' l( k, h- K1 J<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, Y6 ?  L& F8 W; v; Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 N. P" u  F; K<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ I, ~: p9 v* I; L& h+ j3 g! B+ l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ o1 p2 z! b1 d) I( g/ e* S1 |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 \' f1 _, w0 C2 H" T  ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' e/ v! A# G& u4 {! ]1 \. m" M- j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 p1 l# V# p. K5 Q2 C+ H) U. s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 s3 S/ J6 Z$ v3 C/ k3 U$ J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

# r4 J- U5 s: C4 S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 A  R5 J& t. \( M: y8 f( a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 }. `( j* r# f7 U2 i# e2 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>