【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
& m6 F1 U& {. s6 TThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! u& l. U; w2 m( H5 j/ B7 h; x5 kThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ I/ C, F& c: l4 }) `/ TWith the moon kissing it every night
6 x1 A3 ]" L2 B1 v9 ]  D0 k/ aSeeing the sky content with its love
7 O% g+ G& r; A+ W& l1 _It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% Y7 e8 U- _/ |' g- }, X, {Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
/ V9 a, \/ p+ J) u" l( tI want so much to see inside your heart
1 c. \/ P+ R: Z( P# x* vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& @5 y. O3 O) H: o/ [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
6 R: H5 X! i! h* I- G6 }I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 _. N$ r- W8 S  j1 B# t# lWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 N3 @- ^/ X' T! ~. ]/ H7 }6 x<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" L, \8 @7 ?4 x* E4 I7 F& M<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 D4 s, V7 S) n( Z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 h4 V: E0 W; K& Z2 z+ p<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& h2 X' d. Q+ [. e0 D<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
3 g1 u: k2 w7 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  [' K. ^9 \% i+ C<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ h- r2 Y  N3 D& @* }9 I! [<P>你无需担心</P>
  V1 V+ k, B) Y1 w! s9 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
; ^0 d! y! t5 _2 P<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ n  V  O; e( @<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: B7 g7 D/ x7 |+ k7 S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
: k" o' Q  h* r<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
& n* p9 ^/ U0 w3 U- [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 _7 r+ U# \8 G7 {! l2 |3 o<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
- M) o" v. _6 S/ b<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
- q2 l! q/ U. I' v7 Y6 \0 p+ y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
( c! i) g# L6 z) m( D( }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
6 Z0 D% J0 k- h; }3 V5 i<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
. S) X+ q$ o$ ^; k) x% R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
+ \4 {$ a  f: Q7 @0 T7 V<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 ]9 m2 D+ Y* ~  \9 }0 j; P<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) v: S) ^# B  \/ f* D<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

- K$ f' @2 t2 T3 ]2 E+ `. j; J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>