【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 _1 \4 U+ z/ SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
' D& a# ]& J; z. J2 ~. YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
$ C. H. o" R% r: x1 mWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) o7 |# a/ l' }7 v1 D& L, @# J# NIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ `% ?, ~7 I. v; }5 n2 S" |4 ~You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: ~" }% m" \' J+ Y$ }I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 o" \! t1 `% OThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 y$ y) l9 B/ K2 B! A: s  C% N# E+ BI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* R' N  k' ]0 O4 W4 I7 b6 Z8 T+ cI’m still filled with fear
. M6 A$ I& Q/ X2 y3 L' R7 `; @( eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
/ G, j! K7 g% H1 x* h) Z) BI regret not dying
5 X& m5 K2 T. z5 BI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ b) A4 T- o% YWith such a tongue as yours,
$ y4 b. }3 h8 x& p: h6 nYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

8 a2 R) }8 M  |  e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
/ E1 f$ _. J2 [0 _<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
' q2 v1 D0 d3 ~& j$ Z8 r' D  z<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
  e, v( X6 p; z3 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
: @; {  E- V$ p/ q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  d% Z% w7 ~' c/ R; U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
+ I  E! z/ O; E4 Y. R<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: h  {: l0 f2 Y- X1 X; d<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
) B, v0 e9 R* H4 R9 Q* D<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% X9 H; w, ]  A. L0 A+ M0 I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
) C8 y4 c1 K, B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 g6 D* x( b8 q( c. B8 @& M<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) n! m0 X: \& w6 g( D4 v: w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! |3 s6 W4 j* v' N8 l& S7 n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ {+ o4 |2 d& d5 r6 q# v8 J<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: B5 e7 t( K/ [/ Y$ @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 u6 R: i0 f( L  t+ K8 ^<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
; x6 P, K, _5 T" H+ r1 O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ C" U$ |& [6 C9 T3 e4 P' J<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. V2 \1 G; X0 Y' `4 J<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) A8 S1 D, i% L! j. B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: Y0 E5 ]3 }& _1 l0 J+ v8 k3 Y<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) ~9 b4 T  m  I9 R& ?6 F* z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

# m# c: y$ u8 O/ L  e; Z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 T& s  y6 g7 Z1 `( i$ S7 ]7 ^; d<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>