【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
* U& G4 A) q  _' r3 N8 u! e" _The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 D' e2 H0 l: |/ S1 T/ UMaking the sky glitter like gold,
4 _" a6 u/ c5 r' z0 z) `When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 g5 j$ f# e; eWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& Z8 \5 z* Q7 O, H2 NEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% A, j) t3 ?& ~  h8 j2 Z+ w  j! M# ^$ ZI love you I love you with all my heart
  D: Y" F  E! q2 W- s% CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
  ]/ O. ^* v4 n" EYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
7 W  M/ {7 X8 d6 K. P' O$ JI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
, a5 _0 k& Z" f( C, q% UWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
, l  c- P% ^3 `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 J, t& i& M/ |" B' `0 a( m! H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ I; t5 ^% H8 i$ s1 w) `<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
$ a0 z$ O2 f3 E+ J<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
) c5 y  l& b/ e0 X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! s( f* L5 @, z2 K4 k<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 W% t* T* {/ b# a& M- x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
& {+ V5 g3 p2 u5 W9 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 K" ^' `; |! I. [$ ]3 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
7 P# m, l6 |  O) a  f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
5 F+ f. M% p0 Q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
$ V, @0 z4 O1 {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 j0 @. w: s* K; o! q; c( O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! O, @  X2 E  c4 O  z/ q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 R6 J" X6 o/ f3 u/ K6 y" O' E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" Y4 I7 A) a* s3 m9 c  }, @! `/ y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& o' e7 s0 p& _9 E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ O7 G* A, n% s* S, o/ a* R<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ ~( |4 x, f# ~( {5 X<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: o( ]6 r- F, P" B6 W# X) V<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: x: ^% [9 N8 ^+ U% h<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  N' D  |( A- a* l  r, A<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 x9 O; c+ l( O<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- D# @, [) e8 L# n5 y2 o<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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$ x: V" X/ r( Y- |8 w 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>