【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( a2 n) Q  B/ Z- |/ r5 T8 \The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
& V0 k$ O/ a  e: e  [2 R% FWith the moon kissing it every night
; m7 {$ _. J/ a, p; I  ]5 \Seeing the sky content with its love
  z3 n+ O. n. q, a4 `6 Y7 i, r' oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 Z2 h$ t  C8 @& e; W9 j5 F' sYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! O# K2 N' k. U0 {3 M2 QEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
8 ~  {% T' A% H$ WI love you I love you with all my heart
5 W& k* x: o. j5 G9 z3 eNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ ?  u' N% C/ A5 x: d  MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
1 v8 _2 u7 x; a" ^; t7 Y% {I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ \$ w3 ]$ S# V+ o) b1 b* k# [" eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) J! f7 v7 l) t/ E, K5 xI regret not dying
: \: b7 G( B# f3 {I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
; G" @, m- z/ J7 Y- ^With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
' E/ k: l3 }2 \: k<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* u& {& Z3 L2 R4 P& q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
* L" t8 E9 Y0 D& i% P<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% M) y+ Z. ~, m1 a+ e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. D( F$ ^7 p  z  t+ F" @9 [<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  E, U, R+ v* ?6 f# k4 A* _% }<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
9 v" Q# B: f" C<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 c5 Y" Q5 V0 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
! B' Q1 j  F% c6 K$ A& j5 U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
7 b" F# N' Q6 J3 z. ]: h( n6 i<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
, D( j7 q$ a) d# B2 B<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 }2 w8 Q% q- O/ M" N, N- ?<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
  n8 |& P$ a6 Q# M8 d! u# ~<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
3 H+ k; d  Z, ?/ ^' Y<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 _" X3 t: O, j, G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
- {8 L9 R) g2 s6 u6 X, M$ K8 D' K7 Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  x7 I& A& e7 G! X' w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 Y0 V' T  g5 d% Z& n<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- ^- V' J; h6 J+ X# o7 W<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 p% N" W9 l1 _; z- |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
  ~$ \9 H* b9 `  z3 R1 {<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
2 B6 `/ G: X6 K  a; s  W/ Z* |<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 v. w1 \0 x* g' a% E<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 l" L4 v# Z6 S% y1 v! ^' l; N<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- L: j  t! ~4 }: ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) K+ t$ |* |, P$ O" r<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
+ f5 |% @: s3 n- J+ |( U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
0 w" S& w. b2 Y' k6 Y3 ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
& E9 F9 q, N& m9 }1 }9 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
  b7 q8 J8 o7 O) f! o, |6 i9 B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
  J. x2 Q' ^. ], u) F" \8 I<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 V2 d. R0 X( t<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% s: q0 y/ ]7 b; P$ d3 Y0 l8 [<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  f1 y. O% u) ]3 A( z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 e7 W( H- j' E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

+ U. z7 c& c3 k0 _7 D$ N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ ]  F) M) _2 l3 e, ?1 K<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>