【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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2 f: T" E. g; n0 N" c歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 R$ N# Y, f1 [: GWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ ^# q6 a2 @, D& ?& H$ BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 _2 C2 B/ a/ A; y0 t9 ?. V; vThe sky is happy down to its soul
% h# D+ A/ }/ EWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
& g# H* _( t1 }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- r& u& `& ^4 l( W$ R5 cEvery other word you utter is love
, ^& _" ~6 F1 r* \+ ^. q  \; O/ o3 z1 NI really want to know just how much you love me
! l: C6 r. O8 N9 A+ A: c9 GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
) [, T+ t% H0 J2 I& e$ ~" b7 ]3 vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& B8 ~/ g% U/ }1 B5 m: f) t% iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; m5 j3 Y1 R6 r. R$ l. l, I$ W* z3 `I regret not dying
! M; x6 c$ o% q0 `I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
) _( r+ ?, V/ j! a0 }( FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
+ ?5 A" u# x  C4 RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 c+ z( J  L$ a, |2 ^) Z<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 S4 ^& J9 ~" E. ?4 C3 d<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
9 r3 ]3 o, U& Z& Z+ Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 p/ ]) E7 `* c  P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 S* _1 u! u' K/ ?9 F<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 P& U( l$ d0 a3 ]' a  s% ~  |9 W<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* E( D( N# J  L, M6 H0 N- e1 D<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ U! I& e4 m  Q8 s& y( v& X1 a8 M  F<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
' ~- z3 P# b! L  _. ~/ Q6 p+ d7 L<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 K1 Q+ ]( ?' R$ C<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& U+ O2 {( A$ W3 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ q+ q% U, u  F, j2 O' p8 o! p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
  P9 S3 b0 Z1 e9 _. X1 ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* ~9 w' q2 d# _% G/ ^# g: s! j+ \<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 S2 v5 b8 |/ d" \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
# c5 a$ E  S. F3 X2 m<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& E+ K% T4 x% C+ R( x7 \" F9 s. `<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, h4 {* H# \( V* E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& d% |1 m1 z  o6 H<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" J4 d3 b9 T4 C% W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' ]: e; b" Y& R0 g9 g/ A4 M. ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 K# c, z8 J& M! d" R9 M, {# R<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' I7 c. a( h9 f7 U* F8 i<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
7 I9 c+ r& c7 M0 v. m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& T9 ?! m( b# n<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( \5 `! W5 e/ C+ j; _7 Z<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
& Z. r2 m3 g6 y7 I1 W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
8 J1 e+ y0 E( {6 g<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ Y8 z" ^& w/ H  T2 Y0 ~+ l4 @<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 D3 Y5 Q1 h# \7 e" \& M; U<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
* }( [1 t7 H! c' s, }9 z) q; S<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
/ s) n, F# a. t# B: C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' }+ ~+ z+ u8 Y' y) t8 ?<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& I" U9 [0 ^2 A" X* q6 o4 M, K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

# u& D- U* r4 c9 t  |2 s! V8 U我请你剖开它

5 v5 s8 m8 r( D' Z& `. o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: x# f( _7 j+ `* s9 ?6 S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>