【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

( S% n; q4 n" i" o& _一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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' q2 o0 V# P8 l9 V/ F7 \, GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
5 p+ K( Y+ ~( J5 N" j皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
7 W) v7 l7 ~1 \1 H; t; _夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

) M4 Z5 d* W/ nWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
& E5 M7 I2 b: u4 P& f$ SThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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* n3 M+ S" k! U6 a- m( }With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
$ A. `: q% w; N$ d5 g/ w) }夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
& A* x  u1 L/ A8 l) S3 P  yYou needn’t fear anything
' z4 i% T& v3 z3 T! _怕这怕那 又是何苦
# C$ i2 X* M0 h8 O- h- f* mMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
* x2 a0 A8 j# N( H* W% N8 v+ K( Y9 _$ ~Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
7 K" r; T4 G" N) j0 o# b$ g7 bI really want to know just how much you love me
' s6 q3 @8 w* }0 _. N1 a; t/ @真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
* _, n5 I/ ~3 ]) ^6 @' B* J( {- II love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
9 M% r: `3 S5 g0 S9 k$ m& x世间万物  皆不能比

% S' G6 J3 a2 B  O8 A" D" Z0 JCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' g  t' a2 _6 U# ]- C+ |! L能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
  T" V- K/ k5 o- q* NThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
3 B+ B2 I; }) VI want so much to see inside your heart
& x" G/ u6 K: x. u1 g% b我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
& B# |( l: Z$ wTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
: `0 h% o% ^8 |# Q5 f8 m  q若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
# X3 y# D$ V& VI’m still filled with fear
' j$ k4 o) C) ^可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* L& p% `. Y( J' P: O& z你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
/ E' v, B  B5 `3 B, T' Z# AI regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
5 ?2 a( W5 E* u7 q我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
! Y1 H) W- h8 Y8 _! |6 U& EIt’s nothing close to 100,000
3 u% a% \; x0 s7 Q& n7 A也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
0 X7 H$ t0 j+ h0 X/ MRambling on about a thousand words of love
2 m1 r  Y/ u: x向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲

The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 V3 G$ ]* R7 J# h  C# I从未向你吐露衷情
1 k* I$ S& M" K) A" I6 A4 b/ xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( i* f' C; b% p1 w$ L' x- e爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
" L5 d5 {3 b) [1 d, q9 U7 B, HFrom the first moment we met,
7 l& v/ {- b6 l对你一见倾心
- R  V! c0 |4 b% H3 _+ XI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
3 ]- Y( F7 T  i0 w9 H# c' aBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 A; {: g( h2 `1 ~9 G奈何从未谈及内心
( e! Z5 p0 Z! w, r, b) EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
& R' y2 x: p0 K1 J" @I would probably know how you feel
或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
: h3 }% G2 \0 H4 `( CWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
& d9 {5 T/ g* N我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
. w1 o  c( s4 c" r* m- m- cOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
6 N. a# P; H# e. J- HIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" T( ^8 ]3 M2 d( J今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
) Y" E; o2 p6 g; GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
9 Q' z3 D5 m3 m, n3 R: }* Z( W( ?Entrust my love within your heart
' m" M6 u$ M: L( J6 x8 \: B从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
6 f& g6 o5 |; L  H3 pWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
% x7 C  O$ v: Q/ V; U/ q, d! x: [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 ?, V% T6 G! _3 ]6 b只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
8 {: M! o6 K1 a* X$ f0 sIf today isn’t too late,
& W# ~3 r! q  q7 y2 I/ V假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
8 @7 G+ W2 Z1 u' `( I( y. X* DI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
2 ?4 v# [: ^5 H) e1 q8 c8 Y3 g) {Can I entrust it to you?
, N5 _/ o; \* x0 e! D, t可否将它 托付于你？
( F: l% p+ q# I$ ^4 @6 AEntrust my love within your heart
; {- ~' E7 R  O+ T7 _2 {从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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Can I entrust it to you?
  W1 A5 v! g8 i0 c9 t; L可否将它托付于你？
+ ]+ n3 P1 w$ x" _2 hEntrust my love within your heart
; q' i  g4 t) Z6 j从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
" E; @; \' c4 ?* X老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
4 t: L& j$ Z( y1 k- z( Y# ]- S/ ^老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

! i0 f2 r( U5 M/ O不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。